What do you think of my gender essay?

"you’ll find that for every kid who fits a stereotype, there’s another whose breaking one down"...really? I doubt it. Please think why you choose to believe this? I have no intention of being rude, but...the essay is an example of "progressive" b.s. That is, a lot of words with no meaning. I bet your professor will eat it up. Turn it in, for the grade but a wise move will be to realize that while it IS what you have been taught to think, it is not thinking at all. I hope you get it.